after “Dead Leaves” (Les Feuilles Mortes) by Remedios Varo
Today, I will enter the secret portal. Life begins now; there is no past. I hear them at the open window, cackling and threatening. For so long, I have ignored the colorless and chaotic imposter world. Please don’t suggest I do not understand reality. When I put my hand down on the piano, a table, I feel the soft slipperiness of dust, once-luscious fabrics eaten into fine rags. But this illusion is defeated by my own image, the vibrant red of my mane, my skin’s rosy hue, and my favorite blue gown. I am the real. When my lover didn’t return that wind-swept night, I knitted him a suit while I waited. Even after midnight and he had not arrived, I continued to knit one purl two. At daybreak, I hung the completed suit in the corner and fell asleep in my chair. When I woke, dead leaves scattered the floor, blown in through an open window, and a rip rent the draperies in two. I glanced toward the corner and thought I saw my lover until I realized that my creation had taken on my lover’s very appearance. I stroked the wool but felt the suit hollow where my lover’s heart had been. If he couldn’t find his way to me, I would go to him. I began to tinker with the suit, knitting an opening. Over time, I constructed an entrance to the lovers’ labyrinth. I plan to follow my instincts through the hallways and doors until my fingertips reach him and our skin sizzles in unity. Hear them plotting? They still lie to me about his whereabouts. About what happened in the storm that night. I must hurry.
Copyright © 2024 Luanne Castle. All Rights Reserved
Luanne Castle’s recent fiction can be found in Bending Genres, Roi Fainéant, The Dribble Drabble Review, Does It Have Pockets, South 85 Journal, The Ekphrastic Review, and MasticadoresUSA. She has written several award-winning poetry books. Luanne lives with five cats in Arizona along a wash that wildlife use as a thoroughfare.
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Barbara, thank you so much for publishing it. I almost fell into her world when I was writing it ;)!
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It’s my pleasure!
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This is a great piece of prose. Like a wonderfully hopeful story, literally hanging on by a thread and then a bit of a surprise ending. Loved it, thank you.
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Thank you so much, Joni. I’m so pleased you liked it.
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I really did, gorgeous heartfelt prose. Have a blessed weekend. ❤️
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Thank you. You too!
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It kept my interest. I wanted to know how it ended.
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Thanks, Kate. That’s a wonderful compliment.
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I loved it! Your writing fits the painting so perfectly.
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Thank you so much! There is something about Varo’s paintings that light the imagination!
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I love this! I was right there in the story.
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Liz, wonderful to hear that. Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome, Luanne!
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You have a great imagination, Luanne, and a wonderful talent for writing it down.
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Thank you so much! Such a lovely compliment!
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I’m always amazed with the worlds and stories you create with so few words, Luanne. This is such an excellent example!
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I love the language. Dark and beautiful. Great work.
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Oh thank you so much!!! So glad you liked them!
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Luanne’s work is always amazing!
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Thank you so much!!!
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Oh, this gave me chills. And I love that she was a knitter 😉
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Thank you, Marie! She had to be a knitter!!!
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You have done a marvelous job…very captivating story!
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Linda, I’m so glad you enjoyed it!!!
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Intriguing, full of imagination and surreal details, like a dark fairy tale.
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