after Remedios Varo’s “Phenomenon”
Every day I passed a man sitting on a bench under a mesquite. The unrelenting sun threw shade from the man, and each time the shadow was different. At some point, I began to take photos of the shadows and printed them out. Tough binding tape helped to fasten them into a flipbook. Using my thumb to spin through the pages, I saw the adumbration unbending, then rising, and finally running away from the park. Next day I approached the tree, witnessed the man’s flattened image plastered across the bench as if he were painted there. No shadow in sight.
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Luanne Castle’s recent fiction can be found in Bending Genres, Roi Fainéant, The Dribble Drabble Review, Does It Have Pockets, South 85 Journal, The Ekphrastic Review, and MasticadoresUSA. She has written several award-winning poetry books. Luanne lives with five cats in Arizona along a wash that wildlife use as a thoroughfare.
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Luanne, this poem says a great deal about and for those we don’t “see”. Please keep submitting!
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Thank you so very much for your hard work!
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My pleasure! Thank you for your hard work, too!
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Great imagination, Luanne. Now you’ve got my wheels turning and they’re hard to stop. I have all kinds of scenarios going on in my head after reading this.
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Thank you so much, Anneli.
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Oh, interesting!
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Thanks, VJ!!!
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Welcome!
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Hi Luanne, this is very imaginative and interesting. The shadow without a man is a fascinating idea.
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Robbie, thank you!
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Wow!
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Hah, thanks, Marie!
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A great story, Luanne. I can imagine the shock of a flat image.
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Thank you, John. Yes, very shocking!
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😊
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Congratulations to Luanne! She is very good at microfiction.
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Aw, thank you so much, Liz.
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You’re welcome, Luanne.
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Yes!
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this is a beautiful poem Luanne.
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What a great idea for a story/prose. Very interesting and I wondered where you were going with this piece and you definitely got me. Lovely piece, and thank you Luanne.
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Oh my! This is genius writing. I love it to pieces. Thanks for letting me read this. Xo
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