“A Cry for Help” by Dawn Pisturino

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A crimson line across her wrist.
A bracelet of blood.
A visible cry for help,
But nobody comes.
She’s all alone again
To face the ordeal of life:
The challenges, the pain,
The turmoil in her brain.
Death seems like a safe escape,
But her body wants to live!
She picks up the phone
And calls the hotline – her lifeline!
A familiar voice answers.
I’ve done it again, she says.
The voice murmurs reassurance and positive affirmations.
Okay, I will, she answers,
And hangs up the phone.
She dials 9-1-1 and repeats the details of her actions.
Soon, the ambulance pulls up to her door.
She is not alone.

Copyright © 2024 Dawn Pisturino
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Dawn Pisturino is a retired nurse in Arizona whose international publishing credits include poems, short stories, and articles. Her poetry has appeared in several anthologies, most recently in Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women, and the 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine. She is a Mystery Writers of America and Arizona Authors Association member.

31 Comments Add yours

  1. A most important poem which should resonate with all of us who care about the sufferings of our brothers and sisters throughout the world. Isolation, alienation, prejudice, racism, hatred, bullying, parental neglect, societal ostracism and many more factors attribute to this despair, this lonely cry for help that Dawn Pisturino beautifully, and powerfully, writes about in this sad, tragic, but very realistic poem. I congratulate you Barbara for publishing a most thoughtful and thought-provoking poet. Cheers.

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    1. Thank you, Francisco, for your wonderful comment!

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      1. Always a pleasure Dawn. All the best.

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  2. Thank you, Barbara, for publishing my poem! I’m posting it to my website now.

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    1. Meelosmom says:

      Thank you for your heart-felt submission!

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  3. Meelosmom says:

    Dawn, thank you for bringing awareness to those who suffer emotionally and mentally. Francisco says it well. Today we are more vulnerable than ever. I’m not alone when I share that I’ve lost loved ones to suicides. My prayers go out to the suffering and their survivors—we are all victims.

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    1. I’m so sorry, Barbara! If it’s any consolation, people don’t always reveal how they’re feeling or show it on the outside. People can appear calm and happy and still harm themselves. So, I hope you don’t blame yourself in any way. Even psychiatrists don’t always get it right.

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      1. Meelosmom says:

        Thank you, Dawn! It’s hard not to wonder if you contributed, but I realized only a monumental depression with depths of despair could lead to such an act.

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  4. Well done for raising awareness Dawn !
    So many suffer in silence 🙄

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    1. Thank you, Maggie!

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  5. Myriam says:

    tellement vrai; how important. We may feel alone, but we are not.

    its a beautiful poem. Bravo Dawn

    🙏💌

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    1. Merci beaucoup, Myriam!

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  6. Very sad and compelling

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    1. Thank you, Robbie!

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  7. It’s a grim battle and a wonderful poem with a cry for help, Dawn. It’/s wonderful to have the hotline help and 911 to support people in these times❤️

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    1. Absolutely! Thank you, Cindy!

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  8. Raising awareness can only be beneficial, Dawn. Thank you for your poignant poem. ❤️

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    1. It’s my privilege to write it. Thank you for reading it!

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  9. volumes with the statement of I’ve done it again….

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  10. Beautiful and touching, bringing hope to my heart for the poor lady trying to escape the painful reality.

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  11. Willie Torres Jr. says:

    Absolutely Beautiful .
    Your portrayal is both raw and moving. It captures the depth of isolation and the critical moment of seeking help. It’s powerful to see how reaching out can make a difference, and your words highlight the importance of support in times of crisis.

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    1. Support is crucial! Thank you, Willie!

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      1. Willie Torres Jr. says:

        Amen 🙏

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  12. Oh, what a heart-wrenching poem.

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