11:11 by Tricia Sankey

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11:11

by Tricia Sankey
site: https://milspouseprose.com

Recurring nightmare ~
song as sad as the Hulk’s

we’re just ticking machines
moaning with moonquakes

eyes buried / beneath the bed

will we ever collide
in full-bodied
hot flesh?

Come to me now

splicing moments
transforming
time

reset the numbers
and rouse me
in quantum
fields

awake.

@Tricia Sankey

Tricia Sankey is a writer and editor who enjoys blogging at www.triciasankey.com and tweeting her micropoetry @triciasankey. She’s traveled the United States as an Army Wife and received an MFA in Writing from Lindenwood University along the way! Her novella, The Light in the Cave, is now available on Amazon KDP and free to read on Kindle Unlimited!

Gabriela Marie Milton
#1 Amazon Bestseller Author
Books:
Woman: Splendor and Sorrow :I Love Poems and Poetic Prose
Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings
site: https://shortprose.blog/

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  1. gabychops dice:

    Thank you, Tricia, for this beautiful poem!

    Joanna

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    1. Appreciate your kind comment, Joanna! ❤️

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  2. Ingrid dice:

    I love the other-worldly element to this, Tricia!

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  3. Thanks so much, Ingrid! 💖

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  4. I love the visuals your words conjured up Tricia!~. Fabulous! 💖🙏

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    1. Thrilled you enjoyed this Cindy! 💖

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      1. oh yay.. i did!! 💖💖💖

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  5. Absolutely as stunning as I had thought it would be. Aw, the feeling is warm and enchanting, Tricia. Congrats on getting published. ❤❤

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    1. Glad it didn’t disappoint, Lam, thanks so much! 💓

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      1. No, it didn’t… such a wonderful piece. Feel most welcome, Tricia 💕

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  6. I can feel the longing in your verse, Tricia! ❤️

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    1. So glad! Thanks, Punam! ❤️

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  7. Jaya Avendel dice:

    A compelling poem lovely in its imagery and emotion!

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    1. Thanks for your comment, Jaya! ❤️

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  8. merrildsmith dice:

    Beautiful, Tricia! Congratulations!

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      1. merrildsmith dice:

        You’re very welcome!❤️

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  9. Wow what magical beauty in your poetry!

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    1. Thanks, so glad you enjoyed it! 💖

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  10. memadtwo dice:

    It’s always startling to see those repeated numbers appear. A message from the universe to pay attention I think. (K)

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    1. Definitely a spiritual aspect to it, I agree! 💖

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  11. Ali Grimshaw dice:

    An intriguing read that makes me think about the cost of numbing. Thanks for sharing this poem today.

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    1. Thanks for reading, Ali, I think this write is a call to awaken and feel everything, even the uncomfortable stuff! 💖

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  12. Jeff Flesch dice:

    What a wonderful write, Tricia. «reset the numbers
    and rouse me
    in quantum
    fields

    awake.» Amazing! 💖

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    1. Thanks, glad those lines worked for you! 🥰

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  13. Navin dice:

    Beautifully written…

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    1. Thanks for reading, Navin, I appreciate your comment! ❣️

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      1. Navin dice:

        You’re welcome, Tricia ✨❤️✨

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  14. jonicaggiano dice:

    Congratulations on this lovely and passionate piece Tricia. Much voiced with so few words. Big hugs, Joni

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    1. Thanks so much, Joni! 💓

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      1. jonicaggiano dice:

        You are so welcome Tricia. Have a blessed week. ❤️🤗

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      2. jonicaggiano dice:

        ❤️🤗💐

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  15. Meelosmom dice:

    Beautiful, Tricia! The imagery is so original and striking! Thank you for reblogging this poem that Gabriela published in MasticadoresUSA. Please send us more. ♥️

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