Lamed Love by Lamittan Minsah

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Lamed Love

by Lamittan Minsah
site: www.laminsaindies.com 

They strode away
gracefully without a say,
gracefully without a say.

In an appalling night like this,
Big Jackal held the hand of the miss,
in a scary night without a rest,
strolled they down, gently into a forest
where passed by no boys
and no apes made any noise.

Big Jackal stood there, and there he sang,
and there he sang, to Sister Dog in a tongue;
his words awakened the sleeping beasts,
and the forest goat who only bleats;
even the new moon rose below,
charmed by his mellifluous flow.

So the big and the small stood by, marveled
as the two had their bodies sweet and held,
but with silence for love, oh love is a magnet
that draws people even into nights late.

But what he’d longed for he offcut,
seeing the snoops did painfully hurt.
He retreated, turning to her said,
“Too late it is to have you in my bed.”
The words fell on her ears and hurt –
the gates of her heart they did shut,
and so she turned and strode away
gracefully without a say.

@Lamittan Minsah

Lamittan Minsah is Kenyan. He mostly writes poems, short stories and novels. Some of his published works include “The Long-lasting Tree” (historical fiction novel) and Let’s Talk Bride (a collection of poems), both available on Amazon.

Gabriela Marie Milton
#1 Amazon Bestseller Author
Books:
Woman: Splendor and Sorrow :I Love Poems and Poetic Prose
Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings

54 Comments Add yours

  1. Ingrid says:

    This is wonderful, Lamittan: such an atmospheric poem! Congratulations on your publication 🙏🥳🥳

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    1. Such a gratifying pleasure to come by your noteworthy comment here, o charming Ingrid. I’m very glad you enjoyed this poem. Many thanks to you, dear. 💖💖

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      1. Ingrid says:

        My pleasure Lamittan!

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  2. Daphny Aqua says:

    Dear Lam, this is so beautifully written. 👏💖

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    1. If you say so, dear Daph, then the probability is high that’s it true. I’m overjoyed at the meeting of your compliment. Thanks for your reading and genuine thoughts here 😘💖

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      1. Daphny Aqua says:

        You are an amazing poet and writer Lam, reading your works are a great pleasure. It is an honor of mine to come read here dear. 🤗💖

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      2. I feel even much honoured to hear you say these, Daph, and for sacrificing your precious time to time, dear – it’s something to not just turn a blind eye on. I’m certainly filled with glee and admiration. 😇😍

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      3. Daphny Aqua says:

        To read your amazing words I will always have the time. 🤗💖
        Aww.. You’re just too sweet Lam. 😇

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      4. Most welcome, Daph dear. The feeling is mutual. 💕💖

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      5. Daphny Aqua says:

        Have an amazing weekend my friend. 💖🤗

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      6. You too, my loving friend. 🌺❤💕

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  3. Enjoyed this, Lamittan, congrats on the publication! 👏👏

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    1. Thank you so much, Tricia, for your warm compliment. I’m happy you enjoyed. 🌺💖

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  4. That is just lovely, Lamittan. Congrats on the publication!

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    1. Lots of gratitude, my friend D. Wallace. I’m certainly glad you liked this. 👍

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  5. Such a wonderful read! Congratulations, Lamittan.

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    1. Thank you in a big way for stopping by to read and leave such a heartwarming comment. ❤

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      1. You are very welcome. ❤️

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  6. Isackokothochieng says:

    What a power of a pen!
    The creative thinking and metaphorical representation of love is just superb.

    Indeed words have power, it can create and it can also destroy, as for the case of the Big jackal.
    Congratulations lamittan! looking forward to reading more of your creative work.

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    1. Thank you so much, brother Isaac, for such uplifting and kind words. I’m pleased beyond words at your great review of my thoughts 😀 💕💖

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  7. Jaya Avendel says:

    Absolutely love this piece so rich in atmosphere and imagery!

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    1. Oh sweet Jaya, quite a great pleasure to come by your kind compliments here. Many thanks and blessings to you, dear. 💖 🌺

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  8. Wesley Tsuma says:

    Such an awesome piece. Had fun reciting it.😊💯

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    1. Thank you so much, Wesley my friend. I’m glad you enoyed reading. 😊💖

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  9. Wonderful bro! Do keep up the good work.

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    1. Many thanks to you, bro Michael

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  10. Jeff Flesch says:

    A gorgeous poem, Lamittan. Congratulations!! 💖

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    1. I’m happy you liked it, my friend Jeff. Thank you abundantly. 😊 💖

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        You’re most welcome, my friend. Always. 💖💖

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  11. Jane Aguiar says:

    Congrats on the publication and poem is lovely as well.

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    1. Thanks in a big way, Jane. It’s such a great pleasure to know that you liked this. 💖

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      1. Jane Aguiar says:

        I like to read poems. I’m happy you liked my reading. Most welcome,Lamittan💖

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      2. Pleasure 🌺🌺🏅

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  12. Mike U. says:

    Well done, Lamittan! What a delight this is to experience. Such rich imagery and unique form. Congratulations on this publication, my friend, and hopefully many more to come! 🙂

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    1. Mike, it’s always a great pleasure and honour worth admiration to come by your compliments. Thanks abundantly for your wonderful review my friend. 😊🌺

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  13. Wonderful imagery delivered in your words Lamittan!
    Thrilled to see you here and Congratulations my friend! Well done! 💖👏🙏

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    1. Wow, you know I wouldn’t feel complete without your comment, sweetheart. Many thanks for coming on board to read and leave such kind words. Grateful indeed to have such noteworthy friends like you. 💖🌺💖

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  14. SelmaMartin says:

    So lovely, this. Yes, I like this! xoxo

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    1. Thank you so much, SelmaMartin. It’s my joy that you loved this piece. 💕

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  15. It’s like a song! Beautiful!

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    1. Thank you many times for your wonderful compliment. I’m glad you liked it. Xoxo

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      1. It’s beautiful! ♥️🌹💐🥰

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  16. 🤗🥰🌺🌺❤

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  17. You too, my good friend. 💕❤🌺

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  18. Jeffry Thompson says:

    Oh my, lil brother… this is amazing. The rhythm played in my heart softly like cool music. You’re gifted, no doubt. Keep rising, keep shining.

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    1. Thank you. Your support is invaluable, my friend.

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  19. Gorgeous poem, Lamittan. I loved the repititive voice in it – gracefully written too.

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    1. Oh wow, many thanks to you, Shobana dear. I’m pleased you enjoyed. 💖

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      1. You are welcome.

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