
Mindless Brain
by Navin Manik
Author’s sites:
Website
Instagram: @navinspoetry_
The drops in veins
Are the thoughts insane
The talk in vain
Is to prompt the phase
The song I sang
I drop the face
The sign that rays
The darkest day
It’s time to race
And write the date
To account the rate
Of the countless deaths
Of the tiny cells
That reside in shades
Of the mindless brain
The doubts are bad
Are like dots embedded
On a darker shed
That’s propped with paints
But honestly
It’s to pop the pain
On a block with pen
So I strike the pins
To disembark the bane
I rock the string
To shock the wave
And I shot the blame
To fog a name
That’s bothering
The inside of me
The sky is red
And the ground is rain
I lost the track
So I walk the lane
To find the peace
I define the pace
I blind the drapes
To light the sense
I side the rage
To sight the sage
And I spine the strength
To eye the main
I fine the thread
And dissolve the ends
To embroid the change
@Navin Manik
ABOUT US
Welcome to MasticadoresUSA.
MasticadoresUSA was founded by Juan Re Crivello as part of Gobblers/Masticadores in 2021. Its current editor is Gabriela Marie Milton.
MasticadoresUSA features talented writers of poetry and short prose. We primarily publish writers who write in English, and are based in the USA. However, while the publication language remains English, we also welcome the work of our fellow writers from all over the world.
What do we want to bring to our readers? Edgar Allan Poe once wrote: Poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty in words. This is what we are committed to bringing to you. And that’s not an easy endeavor.
SUBMISSIONS GUIDELINES
If you want to submit, please send your work – poetry and/or short prose – to gabrielamariemilton@gmail.com. In addition to the piece(s), you want to have published, we need your name, and the address of your site. Submit your work as a docx attachment – not in the body of the email. Limit your submission to two pieces. We do not accept pieces longer than 300 words.
What are the themes that we are looking for? Surprise us!
However, MasticadoresUSA does not publish any work that contains racist, homophobic, sexist, and hate talk of any kind.
Looking forward to your submissions.
I love the feeling of movement in this poem!
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Thank you very much for your lovely words, Ingrid.
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My pleasure: and thank you for yours!
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My gratitude to Gabriela & MasticadoresUSA for publishing Mindless Brain. I’m delighted & honoured 🙏💫🤍🌟
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My pleasure Navin 🌺🌹🌸
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Thank you for your kindness & support, Gabriela 🙏✨💟💫
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Always 🌹
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Fantastic verse, dearest Navin. Powerful, elegant, and full of light. Brilliant, my friend. ❤️🌹🙏🌺
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Wow Navin, I’m thrilled for you and the power and wonderment of your poem delivered and captured in words! Nice job my friend!👏👏👏
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Congratulations Navin for being published here on this prestigious site. Your poem is like a freight train express, that instead of stopping picks up momentum in your mindless brain locomotive. Its a wonderful poem to read out loud and I especially like this line» The doubts are bad
Are like dots embedded
On a darker shed
That’s propped with paints
But honestly
It’s to pop the pain
On a block with pen
So I strike the pins
To disembark the bane»
Your lines run between playful and reflective…You see yourself, clearly and choose to reveal yourself in colorful metaphors and unexpected bursts of edgy imagery. Reading your poem was a truly entertaining and unique fast-track experience.
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