something altogether unbelievable
by Jeff Flesch
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the iridescent
lamp
casts a shadow
over the carnage
seen, within the myriad
of moments
taken away from me
as
life
is illuminated
too slowly,
casting a net
over the protruding
masses
of fibers and tissues
fallen from the sky
with so many bloody issues
and, then
failure
becomes imminent,
quickly outpacing
the need,
showing up
again and again,
making my heart grimace
as pain radiates
through the entirety
of my beingness
while
broken filaments
of being,
find the little
light left available,
and radiate love
towards
each other
with every bit
of their particles
left unassailable
and,
all at once
love coalesces
every
bit of brokenness, and
the entirety
of my being
becomes something
altogether
unbelievable
@Jeff Flesch
ABOUT US
Welcome to MasticadoresUSA.
MasticadoresUSA was founded by Juan Re Crivello as part of Gobblers/Masticadores in 2021. Its current editor is Gabriela Marie Milton.
MasticadoresUSA features talented writers of poetry and short prose. We primarily publish writers who write in English, and are based in the USA. However, while the publication language remains English, we also welcome the work of our fellow writers from all over the world.
What do we want to bring to our readers? Edgar Allan Poe once wrote: Poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty in words. This is what we are committed to bringing to you. And that’s not an easy endeavor.
SUBMISSIONS GUIDELINES
If you want to submit, please send your work – poetry and/or short prose – to gabrielamariemilton@gmail.com. In addition to the piece(s), you want to have published, we need your name, and the address of your site. Submit your work as a docx attachment – not in the body of the email. Limit your submission to two pieces. We do not accept pieces longer than 300 words.
What are the themes that we are looking for? Surprise us!
However, MasticadoresUSA does not publish any work that contains racist, homophobic, sexist, and hate talk of any kind.
Looking forward to your submissions.
What a lovely poem Jeff.
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Thank you so very much, Sadje. ❤
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You’re welcome my friend
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Great writing, Jeff. Congratulations
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Thank you, Jay. Much appreciated, my friend. 😊
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You bet 👍🏻
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Wow, this is a masterpiece!
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Wow, Sam, that is so very kind of you; thank you, thank you! ❤
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Unbelievable, how you start with ‘ the carnage seen’ and end with ‘love coalesces every bit of brokenness’! This is fabulous writing,Jeff! ❤️
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Ah! What a beautiful comment and compliment, Punam. Thank you, my dear friend! ❤
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My pleasure always, Jeff. ❤️
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Reblogueó esto en Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Jeff this is so beautiful. What an incredibly beautiful description of life. Your piece is very touching and I love the way it ended. Love, Joni
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You are so kind. Makes my heart sing to read your comment. Thank you so much, dearest Joni. Much love to you. ❤️🥰
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Wonderful
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Thank you so much, Tierney! ☺️
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Congratulations! Well deserved, my friend!
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Thank you kindly, Warren. Much appreciate, my friend! ☺️
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You’re welcome!
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☺️☺️
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You have made music with your poetry here, Jeff. Astounding imagery, lyrical and consuming. Brilliant work.
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That’s a beautiful comment, and compliment, Shobana. I’m honored and humbled. Thank you so much. ☺️
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Most welcome, Jeff.
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Wow Jeff, such another beautiful poem dear friend. Congratulations!
So happy for you! 💖
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Thank you so much, dearest Cindy! So much fun to be here with all of you! 💖
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Many congratulations dearest Jeff…
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Didn’t know this comment was here; thank you from the bottom of my heart, dearest Navin. ❤️
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You’re very welcome, dearest Jeff ✨❤️💫
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Lovely lines….congratulations dearest Jeff ❤️
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Thank you again, dearest Navin. Much appreciation and love to you.💖
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You’re very welcome dearest Jeff ❤️
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Yes, the healing process can be slow but so powerful. I love the words you have chosen to depict downfall and rising.
Even a little light can be a helping hand in perpetual darkness. The brokenness grasps on to courage and hope.
Congratulations Jeff. This is so beautiful. 🙂
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It is always such a joy to read your comments, Terveen. Courage and hope do seal that brokenness. I love this comment. Thank you so much, my dear friend. ☺️
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